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Post by shAq on Mar 27, 2005 20:43:37 GMT 6
Last night before I went to bed, Thoughts of you filled my troubled head. Though I've not cried this way in many years, On to my pillow fell six silent tears.
The first was for your smile that I miss, and the taste of your tender lips that I long to kiss. The second was for your angel face, and the thoughts of your warm, loving embrace.
The third comes as no surprise, as I thought of your beautiful, bright, loving eyes. After this the fourth came rolling... Instead of my pillow, it was you I should be holding.
The fifth came for one reason alone... I felt my love for you was not fully shown. I really miss you, my love, my dear... Their just fell my sixth tear ------------------------------------------------------- I don't know who wrote this. But this is very good.
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Post by Finlip on Mar 28, 2005 20:22:41 GMT 6
Yes, a touching poem.
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Post by monika on Apr 15, 2005 11:20:10 GMT 6
ohhhh nice!
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Post by Mitesh on Jun 8, 2005 17:55:52 GMT 6
Indeed a touching poem
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Post by thunder on Jun 9, 2005 20:43:32 GMT 6
One of the most beautiful poem that i have read so far. may be another Pallav Ranjan. Best wishes and keep writing and keep posting it in this site so that i can read.
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Post by Finlip on Jun 9, 2005 20:55:42 GMT 6
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Post by Daredevil on Jun 10, 2005 13:43:21 GMT 6
love is good once to have just to cry now and then even it hurts we just love the wound being in love
tears, wound & heartbreaker sing of love thing to cry 4 us laugh line for others.... sorrow for life.. u just take as joy
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